1.
I rewrote the essay twice.
我把文章修改了两次
2.
Look farefully at the correction which I have write in your essay
请仔细看一下我对你文章修改过的地方
3.
Look carefully at the correction which I have written in your essay.
请仔细看一下我对你文章修改过的地方。
4.
I think you should prune some of the adjectives from your writing, so as to improve it.
我认为你该将文章修改一下，删掉部分形容词。
5.
On Application of Interaction in the Course of Composition Revision in EFL Writing Teaching;
交互在EFL写作教学中文章修改阶段的运用
6.
Improve you composition where possible.
文章能修改之处就修改
7.
Improve your composition where possible.
文章能修改之处就要修改。
8.
(g) revision of Articles of Association.
(七) 修改章程。
9.
after his revision, this article has been turned into gold.
这篇文章经过他的修改，犹如点石成金。
10.
I'll revise the article before its publication.
发表之前我要修改一下这篇文章。
11.
He's now revising the first draft of his essay.
他目前正修改他的文章初稿。
12.
Other articles had been revised with some care.
有些文章则修改得相当仔细。
13.
making no changes at all. He said,
那篇没做任何修改的文章，他说：
14.
The viewpoint of the article is biased, You'd better revise it.
这篇文章的观点偏颇, 最好进一步修改。
15.
Overall, the revised essay is a clearer, smoother version of the original.
纵观全文，修改后的文章比原文更清晰更流畅。
16.
The editor-in-chief blue-penciled the article written by his reporter.
总编将他的采访记者所写的文章加以修改。
17.
Will you polish up this article a bit before we send it to the printer?
在这篇文章付印以前，请把它修改一下，好吗？
18.
Revising what you have written is a crucial step in the writing process.
修改已写出的文章是写作过程中关键性的步骤。